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I ran away from boarding school when I was thirteen. This absolutely took me right back there. Scary!

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Opening with as mystery – made me curious. Well done and good luck!

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Well done! Gripping first pages. I'll get myself over to Amazon!

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I appreciate being able to read your first chapter. Well done. I’m a new writer to Substack and I just started two fiction publications. And I am publishing one chapter a week on each. One is a book I wrote and completed over the last 10 years, called Origins,it’s a dystopian fantasy and the other is a romance erotica novel that I am writing a new chapter for every week that one is called Crimson Diary. I’m excited for these experiments in writing and publishing and we’ll see where it goes. :)

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